Earlier People wore clothes which were related to their culture. But now, people wear same type of all over the world. Is this a positive development or a negative development?

Wearing clothes is an essential requirement in a civilize
socity
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
.
it
Suggestion
It
is subjected with the
evalution
a process in which something passes by degrees to a different stage (especially a more advanced or mature stage)
evolution
evaluation
of apes. Even though the people who lived in
past
Suggestion
the past
wore clothes which
wera
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
related to their
culthure
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
, people in
modern world
Suggestion
the modern world
a modern world
do no consider much concern on
this
aspect. It seems to be a negative aspect than a positive development.
what
Suggestion
What
is
ment
mean or intend to express or convey
meant
by a
culture
?. Difference between languages, wearing clothes, social events as well as the spiritual beliefs of one group from another is called
culture
. Each and every ethnic groups have their own cultural identities. Though many factors
are involve
Suggestion
are involved
with
this
,
cloath
artifact made by weaving or felting or knitting or crocheting natural or synthetic fibers
cloth
slot
clot
is the graphical illustration of a
culture
because there is no any other factor can visualize the cultural difference at once. As an example:,
no body
a person of no influence
nobody
can identify an
indian
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
and a Sri
lankan
Suggestion
Lankan
by sight unless they revealed their real identity. But, with their national suits everybody can recognize who they are. It is the uniqueness of a cultural dress. Cultural textiles are always designed according to the climate factor of the country. There are mainly three climate zones in the
worldcalled
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world called
tropical,
temperated
(of weather or climate) free from extremes; mild; or characteristic of such weather or climate
temperate
and polar zone. Fabrics and styles are manufactured and designed according to the climate condition of that particular region.
the
Suggestion
The
clothes which are used in
winter season
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the winter season
in United
Kindom do
Accept comma addition
Kindom, do
not suitable for the
summer time
the warmest season of the year; in the northern hemisphere it extends from the summer solstice to the autumnal equinox
summertime
in Sri Lanka. It is very
importent
of great significance or value
important
to
identifying
Suggestion
identify
this
different
Suggestion
difference
without working blindly. Even-though the situation as above, wearing
same type
Suggestion
the same type
of dresses all over the world is a common trend nowadays. Blazers are dressed by
british
Suggestion
the British
British
to keep their body temperature static against cool
wether
the atmospheric conditions that comprise the state of the atmosphere in terms of temperature and wind and clouds and precipitation
weather
water
Walter
. But, nowadays
brazers
a male with the same parents as someone else
brothers
braziers
are dressed by others considering it as a prestige
wepon
any instrument or instrumentality used in fighting or hunting
weapons
. It is a total misunderstanding of the value of a dress and verify the negativity of
this
. When we consider the above discussed reasons, It is very clear that wearing wearing
same types
Suggestion
the same types
of clothes all over the world which is not impress the cultural values is a negative development. Because it
distroys
do away with, cause the destruction or undoing of
destroys
destroy
the uniqueness of ethnicity by leading and pushing
culture
towards the
europian
of or relating to or characteristic of Europe or the people of Europe
European
identity.

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