In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with the possible causes?

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has become

global issue

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a global issue

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an alarming rate

rate

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in developed and developing countries

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kidnapping

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theft

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the public

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solutions to tackle them. Undoubtedly,

crime

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rate

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increasing

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by

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factor is poverty.To elaborate

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due to low status

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lack of resources

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people are not able to

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as theft.

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a recent study

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india

a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947

India

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crime

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rate

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the earlier years.

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lack of employment among

youth

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leads to depression among them

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leads to

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act.

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of lack of parental affection among children

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affect their mental

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moreover

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impact

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the impact

of bad company indulges the

youth

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into

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in

antisocial

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any specific behavior

activities

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as rape

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theft

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these are the causes which

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lead

to increasing

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of

crime

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among countries.

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There are various

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and Foremost, government should provide proper education to

youth

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so they can able to get better job opportunities.

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free education till 12 standards

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campaign

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being connected either logically or causally or by shared characteristics

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crime

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preventive solutions

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givernment

the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit

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governments

should put restrictions on the tv programmes which promote

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anti-social

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movies based on gangs

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today

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youth

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try to

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illuminate

illuminates

eliminates

them and

beacome

enter or assume a certain state or condition

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became

becomes

a criminal. To conclude

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it is

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that

criminal

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crime

rate

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is increasing

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by

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above factors

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society is needed.