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Obesity is now a major global epidemic. What can be done to tackle this increasingly common problem?

#obesity #epidemic
As the society is developing rapidly, the
lifestyle
 of people has changed a lot. Obesity is one of a popular diseases among different age groups nowadays. The governments have to take some steps to address
this
 issue as soon as possible. In
this
 essay, some factors that caused it will be
mentioned
kept in good condition
maintained
 and relevant solutions will be given. The governments have to curb
this
 problem because
this
 disease has a tendency to death. Most of people have unhealthy
lifestyle
 due to many reasons. Some people are overweight because of their sedentary job or unhealthy diet. They do not care about their diet and always busy. The
government
 should tax the junk food companies heavily and increase the prices of fast food.
Then
, more fresh fruits and vegetables should be provided in every market. Not only the
government
 should take the responsibility, every individual should
also
 take care of their body condition. People should find motivations to exercise in a regular basis. The
government
 may fund the sports
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
 and build more gym so that people can go and exercise when they are free.
Furthermore
, a lot of teenagers do not have
a
Suggestion
an
 appropriate education in healthy
lifestyle
, their parents should teach them about the right way to have
healthy
Suggestion
a healthy lifestyle
lifestyle
. To conclude, obesity is a pervasive problem nowadays. The
government
 and the citizens should try hard together to solve
this
 problem. Many people are obese because of some inevitable factors, they need to be aware of some potential serious diseases that they might get.

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