You are a student at a language school in New Zealand studying Business English. Part of the course is a summer work placement programme. Unfortunately, you have just learnt from the school that this programme has now been cancelled. Write a letter to the School Principal. In your letter: state your reason for writing describe the problem and your concerns explain what you would like the Principal to do

Dear Mr.Ali,
This
is Lama, I am a student doing Business English and I got an acceptance in the National Bank to do my summer training programme as planned for
this
course,
however
,
this
requirement was cancelled recently and
that is
why I am writing
this
letter.
First
, I need to ask for your support regarding my problem.I will try to explain it briefly to avoid wasting your time.
Second
, I started since 2017 when the training course was a must for graduation and I had to look for a place to accept me as a trainer,
however
, I was informed that
this
is no longer a requirement.
Furthermore
, I made all my arrangements in order to travel to Dubai and do my work programme.
Third
, I would request your help in considering
this
summer programme as a graded course, because the company in Dubai will send you directly my evaluation form including my progress tracking.
Finally
, I will be waiting for your response as soon as possible.Thanks for your time and effort in advance. Yours sincerely, Lama Jaljouli

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