Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social, and commercial, pressures. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

It is commonly said that
today
's children are pressurized and are facing harder and harder academic, social
and
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And
commercial challenges.
This
essay intends to discuss the causes of these pressures and suggest some
measures
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Measures
to alleviate the problem. I believe that children must be shielded from
such
mounting pressures. There are many academic pressures on children.
Today
's
child
is not competing with the
child
next
door, or
even
used as an intensive especially to indicate something unexpected
Even
of one's town or country. He is competing with the
child
of the
globalvillage
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global village
. The big planet Earth of
yesteryears
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Yesteryears
is a
small well
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small, well
-linked global village of
today
. Parents want their children to excel in every field. They send their children to the best schools, where the school bag is often heavier than the
child
himself. Even after school hours there are private tuitions. Children don't have time to bloom and bring out their
hidden
not accessible to view
Hidden
talents. There are
also
many social and commercial pressures. Socially, the children of
today
are in a huge dilemma' They want to adopt the global culture, whereas their parents force them to confine themselves to the
traditions
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Traditions
.
This
sometimes makes them rebel against the rules laid by their elders.
Then
, they
also
face peer
pressure
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Pressure
, which can be good if their peers are good, and bad if their peers are not disciplined.
This
peer
pressure
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Pressure
coupled with the consumerist society of
today
can lead to a lot of stress and strain on children. They see the latest models of cell phones and other items with their peers and want to buy them. When
they
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They
are unable to do so, they get stressed. The solutions are not simple. Children have to be handled with great care. Parents should have realistic
expectations
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Expectations
from their children. They should have a pro-active approach and give time to their children. The biggest onus is on the schools and teachers. They should strive to bring out the best in every
child
and
competition
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Competition
and co-operation should both be taught simultaneously. The aim of
competition
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the competition
should not be
to
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To
win at all cost. Children have to be taught to win with modesty and
lose
grant freedom to; free from confinement
loose
with 8race. To summarise, there is no doubt that the children of
today
are facing so many pressures, but steps should
be
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Be
taken on a war footing to protect their innocent childhood.
Otherwise
, these pressures will stifle the
physical
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Physical
and psychological growth of children.

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    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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