Children are facing more pressures nowadays from academic, social, and commercial, pressures. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?

It is commonly said that
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children
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are
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and are facing harder and harder academic, social and commercial challenges.
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essay intends to discuss the causes of these
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and suggest some measures to alleviate the problem. I believe that
children
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must be shielded from
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mounting
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. There are many academic
pressures
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on
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.
Today
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's
child
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is not competing with the
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next door, or even of one's town or country. He is competing with the
child
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of the
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global village
. The big planet Earth of yesteryears is a small well-linked global village of
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. Parents want their
children
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to excel in every field. They send their
children
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to the best schools, where the school bag is often heavier than the
child
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himself. Even after school
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there are private tuitions.
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don't have time to bloom and bring out their hidden talents. There are
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many social and commercial
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. Socially, the
children
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of
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are in a huge dilemma' They want to adopt the global culture,
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their parents force them to confine themselves to the traditions.
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sometimes makes them rebel against the rules laid by their elders.
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, they
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face peer pressure, which can be good if their peers are good, and bad if their peers are not disciplined.
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peer pressure
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the consumerist society of
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can lead to a lot of stress and strain on
children
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. They see the latest models of cell phones and other items with their peers and want to buy them. When they are unable to do so, they get stressed. The solutions are not simple.
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have to be handled with great care. Parents should have realistic expectations from their
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. They should have a
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approach and give time to their
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. The biggest onus is on the schools and teachers. They should strive to bring out the best in every
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and competition and
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should both be taught simultaneously. The aim of competition should not be to win at all
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.
Children
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have to be taught to win with modesty and lose with 8race. To summarise, there is no doubt that the
children
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of
today
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are facing so many
pressures
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, but steps should be taken on a war footing to protect their innocent childhood.
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, these
pressures
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will stifle the physical and psychological growth of
children
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.

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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs

The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.

A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).

Stick to this essay structure:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pressures
  • Stress
  • Competition
  • Expectations
  • Peer influence
  • Technology
  • Media
  • Standardization
  • Balanced lifestyle
  • Extracurriculars
  • Education reform
  • Financial support
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