The diagrams below show the changes that have taken place at West Park Secondary School since it construction in 1950.
The provided
diagram
shows the Use synonyms
changes
West Park Secondary Use synonyms
School
has undergone since it was first established in 1950.
As is presented, the Use synonyms
school
has gone through some major Use synonyms
changes
and has Use synonyms
also
remained the same since 1950. When looking at the diagrams, you can see that the main Linking Words
school
building has not changed at all. There was an additional building added Use synonyms
on
in 1980 called the Science block which was added to accommodate the Change preposition
apply
increase
in student enrolments, which Use synonyms
it
was not Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
apply
anticipating
. The only other major Replace the word
anticipated
changes
have been to its surroundings. Use synonyms
According to
the Linking Words
school
’s layout Use synonyms
diagram
of the year 2010, there has been an Use synonyms
increase
in the size of the car park compared to the Use synonyms
1980’s
Change noun form
1980s
school
layout Use synonyms
diagram
. When deciding to Use synonyms
increase
the Use synonyms
school
car park area, certain Use synonyms
school
facilities had to be sacrificed, Use synonyms
for instance
, the sports field is a Linking Words
third
of its size compared to the 1980’s Linking Words
school
layout Use synonyms
diagram
. The playground was Use synonyms
also
downsized by a quarter of its original size in 1950 and 1980.
My conclusion is that these Linking Words
changes
had to be done in order to accommodate a major Use synonyms
increase
in enrolments of students since its establishment in 1950 and maybe Use synonyms
also
Linking Words
due to
the growth in population and developments in their area.Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
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