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The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant .

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant .
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The table illustrates the
percentage
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 of students who participated in four various kinds of
schools
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 in 2000, 2005 and 2009.
Overall
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, it is completely clear that the
percentage
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 of pupils who enrolled in specialist
schools
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, grammar
schools
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 and
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schools
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 decreased from 2000 to 2009,
while
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 the increased
percentage
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 of community
schools
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 is completely obvious.
To begin
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, the
percentage
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 of enrolled specialist
schools
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 reduced with the passage of time, and 12, 11 and 10% were calculated for
this
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 group of students in 2000, 2005 and 2009, respectively,
although
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 not significantly.
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, from 2000 to 2009, grammar
schools
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 and
voluntary - controlled
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schools
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 fell from slightly less than a quarter (24%) and just over half (52%) to only 12 and 20%, respectively.
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The percentage
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 of students in community
schools
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 in 2009 compared to 2000 increased slightly less than fivefold from 12% (2000) to 58% (2009).
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 and as a final point, it is interesting to note that only the
percentage
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 of community school pupils were elevated in classes from 2000 to 20009.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words percentage, schools with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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