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Some people say tv programs and movies on crime are more popular. Why is it increasingly popular? What are the effects on society?

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It is argued that the number of TV shows and movies on crime is increasing. There are undoubtedly some causes as well as negative consequences of
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 trend in the society. Several reasons can cause the popularity of the crime movie genre. The plot in
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 films is mysterious with some elements of adventure which leads to a sense of curiosity in the audience as well as an increase in the adrenaline hormone level. These two factors result in excitement, joy, and satisfaction among people after watching
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 movies.
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, there would be a high demand for production of
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 genre. So producers, actors, and writers are keen on working on
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 movies, since the box office is guaranteed. As
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 movies and programs are getting popular, several related negative consequences can be anticipated. The main issue is that people, especially teenagers, are introduced and encouraged in various ways of involving in criminal activity.
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, the act of crime is not being appreciated in movies directly, the individuals who play
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 roles are famous actors or actresses that have a huge number of fans, those fans can easily be influenced by the charactered played in the movie. Another effect is that, being proposed to so much violence through the time makes people to be short tempered. People who watch
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 scenes would be more probable to get frustrated and angry in their life.
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, when someone watches a movie full of killing and blood scenes will have those pictures in his or her mind for a while, and it can cause them to be annoyed sooner than peers. In conclusion, various reasons are enhancing the popularity of criminal movies which certainly has adverse effect on the society.
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