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Environmental problems are serious in many countries. It means that the only possible way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

#countries #environment #level
IT IS TRUE THAT SURROUNDING WEATHER HAS CHANGED A LOT NOWADYAS THAT AFFECTS THE ENVIRONMENT BY ANY MEANS. CERTAIN IDEAS TO RESOLVE
THIS
 MENACE IS THE FOREIGN LEVEL MANAGEMENT.
FIRST
 OF ALL,
THIS
 ESSAY WOULD 100 DISAGREE WITH THE ABOVE NOTION DUE TO THE MAJOR REASON THAT WILL BE DISCUSSED BELOW AND
SECONDLY
, SUGGEST THE PRIMARY ALTERNATIVE TO PROTECT THE SURROUNDING AT ARE BEST. WHEN IT COMES TO THE WHETHER CHANGES, THE PROBLEM HAS PSREAD ALL AROUND THE GLOBE THAT HAS DECLINE THE CHANCES OF OBTAINING AIDS FROM ANOTHER TERRITORIES AS THEY ARE AE
ALSO
 FACING THE SAME SITUATION.
HENCE
, I BELIEVE, IT IS NOT A GOOD IDEA TO GET A ASSET FRON THEM.
FOR EXAMPLE
, A MUCH RENOUNED NATION THE USE HAS 50% OF THE ISSUES IN COMAPRED TO DEVELOPING COUNTRIES, EVEN THEY HAVE THE LATEST INNOVATIVE INSTRUMENTS OR TOOLS. SO, AS PER MY VIEW, PROVIDING INFORMATION TO THE PUBLIC ABOUT THE CONSEQUENCES OF SURGING THE ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEM COULD ABLE TO HELP TO GET RID OF
THIS
 DETRIMENTAL CONDITION OF THE PLANATE.
FOR INSTANCE
, AS PER THE UK WHETHER DATA, THERE HAS BEEN 40% DECREASE IN THE SPREADING THE TRASH
THAT IS
 AAFTECTING THE SURROUNDING AND WEATHER OWING TO THE FACT THAT THE UK CIVILIANS HAS A ENOUGH KNOWLEDGE AND UNDERSTANDING OF THE TAKING CARE OF THEIR ENVIRONMENT. IN CONCLUSION, SURROUNDING MENACE INDEED SOLVE IF WE ALL WORK TIGAETHER AS A TEAM. PERHAPS,
THIS
 ACTION REQUIRES THE MAIN SUPPORT FROM THE REGIME TO SOREAD THE AWARENESS AROUND THE CIVILIANS.
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