Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things we don't really need. Others say that advertisements tells us about new products that may improve our lives. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

The diagram
illustrate
Suggestion
illustrates
a certain nation's
exports
Suggestion
export
income in billions between 2015 and 2016 in. The exports were 5
difference
Suggestion
different
types which are
petruleum
a dark oil consisting mainly of hydrocarbons
petroleum
, engineered, gems and jewellery, Agricultural, and
textle
artifact made by weaving or felting or knitting or crocheting natural or synthetic fibers
textile
textual
textiles
products. Overall, petroleum and engineered goods are the most popular product in foreign countries while
tesxtiles
artifact made by weaving or felting or knitting or crocheting natural or synthetic fibers
textiles
is the least.
To begin
with, petroleum and engineered goods have a similar trend. Both of them are sold at around 61 and 57
percent
respectively and
Accept comma addition
respectively, and
increase a little in a
year
after with 3 and 8.5
percent
higher
sale
Suggestion
sales
in 2016. Gems and jewellery,
however
, had a slightly downward trend with 43
rate
Suggestion
rates
in 2015 and shrink a little to just 40 rate in a
year
after.
Next
, agricultural's export
has became
Suggestion
has become
stable
in
Suggestion
during
this
period with just 30
percent
along the
year
. Meanwhile, Textiles had experienced a significant increasing from around 25 to 32
percent
within a
year
. In conclusion,
This
country should be a developed state as it was mostly
export
Suggestion
exported
petroleum and engineered goods.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Try other services:

All the services are free for Premium users