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In order to study at a university the students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree?

Fees for higher
education
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 are expensive and not affordable for everyone, so, according to some
education
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 in
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university
Suggestion
universities
the university
 should be free for everyone regardless of their background. In my opinion, I agree that higher
education
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 ought to be free as it will greatly benefit both individuals and
society
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. A good reason to abolish
university
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 fees is that it gives
people whether
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people, whether
 rich or poor equal rights. At present, students from a poor background are prevented from entering
university
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 because they’re unable to afford the fees.
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 excludes a large portion of
society
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 and is discriminatory which can be avoided by getting rid of tuition fees. Another point to consider is that having fees at these educational institutions means that students will no longer have to work at the same time as studying to cover their costs.
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, a majority of students in the UK have to work either full time or part time while studying to pay their fees. Free higher
education
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 should,
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, produce better results as students will be able to focus more on their studies.
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, free
education
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 in universities will benefit
society
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 at large, for the simple reason that it will open up higher
education
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 to a wider section of the population.
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 will result in increasing the number of educated people.
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, having a greater source of skilled and knowledgeable professionals will bring greater rewards to the
society
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 as a whole.
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, it can bring more economic advantages to a country and
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 help in doing well in various fields. In conclusion, free
university
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education
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 is a must for any country that values equal rights and one that wishes to advance. The cost of free
education
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 will be recouped many times over by the benefit it brings.

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