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Some Expert believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school.(Agree/disagree)

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Foreign
language
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 plays a vital role in our day to day life.It not only adds a skill to our profile, but
also
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 groom the child's overall personality. A Child becomes much more confident. Nowadays, most of the International Schools have many exchange
student
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 opportunities that a
student
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 gets while studying.It's one of the golden opportunity and with prior knowledge of a foreign
language
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, a child does not face any difficulty.
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Student
Suggestion
The student
A student
 should have a good communication skill and that comes with practice,
that is
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 why I strongly agree that foreign
language
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 should be taught to
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student
Suggestion
a student
students
the student
 in primary
school
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.
Language
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 is not a subject that could be memories, everything is achieved with hard-work and patience.It is not our mother tongue or our
first
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language
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, we need
time
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 to adapt any
language
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, and it will not be fulfilled if we start learning
language
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 in secondary
school
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.
Therefore
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, the students learning from primary
school
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 will get more
time
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 and it will be more beneficial for them. At the start, children are in their learning phase, they grasp more and more things happening around them. If a foreign
language
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 is taught in the primary stage,
then
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student
Suggestion
the student
 has a good hold of that
language
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. Because they are learning at a very early stage so there basics will be more clear and can have a strong foreign
language
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 communication skills in future. And as the result,
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student
Suggestion
the student
students
a student
 won't be facing any difficulties because their base will be strong.
Student
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 have so much pressure in secondary
school
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 related to academic studies, sports or career that they don't get
time
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 to think about other skills.And, due to
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this
plural of "this"
these
 students are not able to devote their
time
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 in the foreign
language
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 as they already have many other priority stuff lined up. Whereas, when students are in primary
school
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 they don't have much mental pressure and can learn better.
However
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, secondary
school
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student
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 will face much problem than primary ones, since primary once have no mental pressure. There is no age for learning new things, you can achieve anything at any point in life, but when it comes to
language
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, learning it at an early stage is much more beneficial than learning it in later stages.
Therefore
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, we should keep the foreign
language
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 in primary
school
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 rather than secondary
school
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.

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