The Internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. although some of these chanes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?

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The internet
has brought a numerous changes in our life in recent years.
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Even though
here are many pros and cons
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the benefits always outweigh the negative.
Firstly internet
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Firstly, internet
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bring a vast change in industry
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education
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communication and many others.Through many websites there are many online courses available.It is time saving and more effective for the persons.Another use is online shopping.
Secondly
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it provides many job
oppurtunities
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunities
for many IT people.Online services are provided by expansion of internet.The wireless massive
network
of internet is the computer.Almost 90% of the people is fully depend on
computer
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the computer
computers
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without
this
an individual
always find
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always finds
difficulty
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difficult
to survive.Each and every bank
transactions
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transaction
all depend on
this
massive
network
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some argue that it has a negative impact.One of the main
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disadvantages
is online crime.Nowadays
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it is very common in recent years.Many
froggery
a copy that is represented as the original
forgery
and fraud works conducted through
this
network
.Another cons is people do online purchasing regularly through different websites.
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they order food through online via
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a network
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cause
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causes
obesity because people do less physical activity.Since the technology developed
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people lack direct communication towards each other.Prolonged consuming of
this
may cause many health problems like spine defect and other visual problems. To conclude
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eventhough
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even though
it has many negative
impact
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impacts
the positive things always outweigh it
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since it has a numerous benefits.So my opinion is the overall effect is positive.

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