You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start

Dear Sir, My name is Nischay Dhiman, and I was recently hired for the role of senior software developer in your company. I am writing to inform you that I will not be able to join
next
week due to some unavoidable circumstances as I my joining date was 13th March and my flight tickets got cancelled due to weather conditions in Delhi.
Firstly
, I would like to mention that, I am highly obliged that your company has given me an opportunity to work in Germany.
However
,
last
Saturday, I received an email from the airlines, mentioning the cancellation of all the flights to Germany till
next
month. Even though, I tried to contact them in person as well as on their customer support, I have not gotten any reply.
Moreover
, I did try to book the flights on the other airlines as well, but, each airline from Delhi has been either delayed or on hold for a month. I am totally stuck in
this
situation and
hence
I am not able to join on the designated date.
Although
, according to the news, there is a chance that weather conditions are going to get better in a week, So I believe, I would be able to reach Germany on the 1st of January, along with all of my luggage. I am extremely sorry for the inconveniences caused. Yours faithfully, Nischay Dhiman

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