success is determined by handwork, and luck has no relation to success.providing specific examples and reasons to support your position do you agree or disagree with this idea

Even in our modern society,
one
cannot deny that luck sometimes has been considered in relation to
success
. But many people are of the belief that accomplishment is the prize, which only hard workers may achieve in their life. In
this
essay the reasons why I agree with the latter idea has been discussed.
First
of all, in my perspective working harder may increase the chance of
success
. As a matter of fact it works as a lottery machine which can print lots of chance cards for a person and make him a winner.
For
instance those
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instance, those
who works more than
usuall
occurring or encountered or experienced or observed frequently or in accordance with regular practice or procedure
usual
usually
employees (10-12 hours a day) will have double chances than the ones who leave work earlier (6 hours a day)
.
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.
The proportions of reaching a goal are much higher when you try different routes to
is
Suggestion
be
. Working harder
this
way is rather more related to accomplishment than
willdering
around searching for luck in order to bring fortune into your life.
Secondly
, the term
success
in my believe is no about the short term goals like money and
instead
about the long term ones which are constructing an infrastructure of achievements in our life. Something that can't be demolished easily.
For example
a successful businessman like an entrepreneur isn't the rich
one but
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one, but
the
one
who can gather himself up after each failure. A hardworking characteristic always makes his effort until he achieve what is determined to be achieved, While
on the other hand
the lucky
one
don't understand the value of his mistakes and may break behind an easy obstacle in his career leading to losing his job. In conclusion working hard has an
unbounding
incapable of adapting or changing to meet circumstances
unbending
unbinding
unending
relationship with the correct meaning of
success
. The more We go deeper the less We found luck in relation with
success
.

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