success is determined by handwork, and luck has no relation to success.providing specific examples and reasons to support your position do you agree or disagree with this idea

Even in our modern society,

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cannot deny that luck sometimes has been considered in relation to

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. But many people are of the belief that accomplishment is the prize, which only hard workers may achieve in their life. In

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essay the reasons why I agree with the latter idea has been discussed.

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of all, in my perspective working harder may increase the chance of

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. As a matter of fact it works as a lottery machine which can print lots of chance cards for a person and make him a winner.

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who works more than

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occurring or encountered or experienced or observed frequently or in accordance with regular practice or procedure

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employees (10-12 hours a day) will have double chances than the ones who leave work earlier (6 hours a day)

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The proportions of reaching a goal are much higher when you try different routes to

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way is rather more related to accomplishment than

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around searching for luck in order to bring fortune into your life.

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, the term

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in my believe is no about the short term goals like money and

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about the long term ones which are constructing an infrastructure of achievements in our life. Something that can't be demolished easily.

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a successful businessman like an entrepreneur isn't the rich

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one but

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one, but

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who can gather himself up after each failure. A hardworking characteristic always makes his effort until he achieve what is determined to be achieved, While

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the lucky

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don't understand the value of his mistakes and may break behind an easy obstacle in his career leading to losing his job. In conclusion working hard has an

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incapable of adapting or changing to meet circumstances

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relationship with the correct meaning of

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. The more We go deeper the less We found luck in relation with

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