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You should spend about 40 minutes on this question. It is better to save money than to spend it. How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in today’s world? Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own experience. You should write at least 250 words.

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In today’s consumer world, there is an opinion asserting that saving
money
 is more advisable compared to simply splash it out. Having said that, I utterly agree with the given statement on the basis of some compelling reasons which will be discussed in detail.
To begin
 with, one of the most rational justifications in support of
this
 mindset is that we live in a fast-changing world which is full of unexpected events; to put it differently, it is an absolute necessity to have a reserve of funds in case of emergencies, including unemployment, illnesses or other crisis in some points in life.
Furthermore
, if there are no proper plans for managing earnings, not only are individuals bound to put themselves at risk of reckless spending, but worse, they are prone to lead a wildly extravagant lifestyle;
for instance
, by purchasing frivolous or unnecessary items particularly those luxurious ones while it might just give them some momentary pleasures.
Lastly
, those who tend to have a disciplined style of living and save regularly some amounts of their income, even if it is relatively insignificant, they are more likely to accumulate vast sums of
money
 in long-run which in turn can be used to meet their targets,
for example
 purchasing a car or property. It might be said that people make
money
 to enjoy a better life and make the most of every moment of their lives. Despite
this
, it seems that for many people, these pleasures are momentary and outweighed by issues,
such
 as becoming stuck in deep financial problems. To conclude, saving
money
 offers a great number of advantages, ranging from avoiding excessive sending to fulfilling our long-term goals which are achievable through proper saving scheme.
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