In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Nowadays people stop thinking about the healthy
food
, in
this
essay I will share the reasons behind
this
issue
and the things which I think will solve the
issue
.
First
of all, let's Define the
issue
people are ignoring very important aspect about life which is healthy
food
.
However things
Accept comma addition
However, things
like sweets or ice-cream, it's very important, like medicine for youngest as well as no one cares about the side effects for
this
dessert. The best example here is the fast
food it's
Accept comma addition
food, it's
easy to find anywhere and anytime which make the people lazy to cook. Adding to
this
the junk
food
restaurant is targeting all ages by doing a great marketing campaigns all over the social media,
moreover
all the above points lead to increase the average weight for a lot of people which very complex problems. From my point of view I think The solutions to solve
this
issue
should not come only from the parent bus
also
from the government by adding a high tax on the junk
food
beside working to reduce the price for the vegetable a and the fruit which will force the people to reduce ordering Unhealthy
food
.
Furthermore
the parents will have to guide their children by providing accurate information about the benefits of vegetables as well as they can ask help from the doctors by adding advice every day in the social media entrances people how to control the perfect weight.
Finally
the parents should encourage their children to go to the gym and do exercise every Day to have a healthy life.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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