There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

Dear Sir/Madam I’m writing
this
letter with regard to my frequent inconvenience of your
bus
service during the
last
two weeks. There is a huge doubt about the reliability of
this
bus
service since it has been arriving at my
bus
stop with huge delays for the past two weeks. I am commuting your
bus
service in order to reach the office, only because it has been very reliable when it comes to timing before, and I have been late
to
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my work due to all these delays. I would suggest that you do some kind of investigation on the reasons for these delays and implement some strategies to avoid
this
kind of delay in the future. Yours Sincerely,
Savithu
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Savita
De Silva

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