Some people think that foreign visitors should be charged more than locals when they visit cultural and tourist attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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It is utterly claimed that certain individuals believe locals ought to be charged less than overseas visitors when they

visit

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cultural and

tourist

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attractions in a country. I somewhat agree with the above-mentioned notion as the arguments for and against it are equal. On the one hand, the major reason why I argue that foreign visitors ought to be paid more than locals is because they have a great disparity between their

standpoint which

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standpoint, which

means that local individuals may not want to pay the amount of

money

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to see cultural and

tourist

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attractions;

however

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tourist

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fundamentally tend to pay the amount of

money

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in order to

visit

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this

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type of places.

This

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is because,

this

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kind of attractions

are not interesting

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is not interesting

for local people since they know their culture and attractions;

therefore

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, if they pay more

money

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than foreign visitors, they might lose their interest,

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of which they would forget their culture and real identify. Another convincing argument is that government can earn

money

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from foreign visitors than dweller.

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to say,

tourist

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are more interesting to

visit

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this

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kind of

pleace

a point located with respect to surface features of some region

place

peace

police

so entry costs does not matter

for

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them, due to which

this

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situation

are

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benefical and great chance

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a beneficial and great chance

beneficial and great chance

for hotels and governments so as to expand their budget. From another angle, I am

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convinced that

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situation can decrease

visitors’

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visitor

number. To be more specific, if tourists face any discrimination according to costs, they may not

visit

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these countries which can reduce the profit of countries.

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, taxi drivers and hotels receive 2-3 times more

money

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from foreigners than locals in huge

touristic

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countries

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as Turkey, owing to which tourists never come back so they lose the great amount of

money

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. By way of conclusion, considering the

aftermentioned

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points, I somehow agree that tourists ought to pay more than local individuals when they

visit

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tourist

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and cultural attraction.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

317 words

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Include an introduction and conclusion

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