Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the developments of the technology, a human-being witnessed with a social media that changed the way of communication style of

people

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the people

that were existed from century. The social media affected people in different ways,

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, I agree with the statement partly, because there are

enermous

extraordinarily large in size or extent or amount or power or degree

enormous

positive sides whereas it has many drawbacks. One of the main improvements of a social media is that it brings new type of communication, which make people closer from each other in long distance,

i

refers to the speaker or writer

I

.e.

people

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People

became more closely virtually, while people around the world have

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the possibility

despite their location and nation.

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, a half century ago, nobody can predict that it would be possible for mankind.

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, my brother who studied on abroad could not see my family almost 2 years, but now we can see our relatives in every

minutes

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minute

with the help of video calling and messaging. For

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reason, thanks to the applications of social networks people become together and cohesively.

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, with the usage of social media, people are getting more engaged and wasting their time irrationally.

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, a social media is wide platform, where

peope

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

with the different background and a social status. Naturally, people compare themselves to others and it

cause

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causes

various

psycholgical

mental or emotional as opposed to physical in nature

psychological

problems. According to the studies, the number of people who to be subjected psychological breakdown is increasing rather than 50 years ago.

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In

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regard, people should pay attention to their mental health and spend time more productively beyond the Internet. To conclude, with the coming of social websites in the life, people achieved many things and solved great deals of problems in terms of communication, while people have many opportunities to find many friends in any corner of the earth planet.

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, there are different kind of issues that people suffer because of their consequence like

violation

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a violation

of psychology and wasting time for

nonsens

a message that seems to convey no meaning

nonsense

things as following stars and models.

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, people should involve moderately and effectively.