You have had a back account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.

Dear Sir, I am writing to enquire about a situation that was informed by a letter
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from
your bank that express a charge in my
account
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of all, I will start
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about the problem. The letter said that my
account
is
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at
$240 overdrawn, for
this
action will be charged $70, money that was taken directly from my
account
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However
, I know
this
is not correct, because I never did that action.
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want to know what is the reason for that charged was taken from my
account
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can be
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that is
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a client
of your bank since a few years ago, but I have never had a similar problem. I
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forward to hearing from
your
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
in the near future. Your faithfully, Romina Huaiquil

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