You have had a back account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.

Dear Sir, I am writing to enquire about a situation that was informed by a letter of your bank that express a charge in my
account
.
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of all, I will start
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about the problem. The letter said that my
account
is
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$240 overdrawn, for
this
action will be charged $70, money that was taken directly from my
account
.
However
, I know
this
is not correct, because I never did that action. For
this
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I want to know what is the reason for that
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was taken from my
account
, and how
this
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can be
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. I am sure
that is
not correct
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because I am
client
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of your bank since a few years ago, but I have never had a similar problem. I look forward to hearing from
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in the near future.
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faithfully, Romina Huaiquil
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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