You have had a back account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is $240 overdrawn and that you will be charged $70 which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect. Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to enquire about a situation that was informed by a letter of your bank that express a charge in my

account

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of all, I will start

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about the problem. The letter said that my

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$240 overdrawn, for

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action will be charged $70, money that was taken directly from my

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, I know

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I want to know what is the reason for that

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was taken from my

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because I am

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of your bank since a few years ago, but I have never had a similar problem. I look forward to hearing from

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in the near future.

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faithfully, Romina Huaiquil

Submitted by rominahuaiquil on Sat Mar 07 2020

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

142 words

5.00

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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