It has been noted that many people who had a big impact on the world gave themselves completely to their work and did not bother with the idea of “work-life balance”. To what extent should people try to have a good work-life balance?

Balancing lifestyle and
work
has been a challenging topic ever since human started discoveries on the earth.
Moreover
, it is observed that few great people, who have contributed to the world, had no
time
to think about
this
issue. I completely believe that as social beings, we owe to adopt certain protocols to overcome
this
problem.
This
is essential to maintain good relationships. By
this
I mean to say, family bonds are fragile,
hence
one who is dedicated to
work
also
needs to allocate appropriate
time
to the family. In India,
for example
, a recent news reported that a majority of the divorce cases pertain to the couples, who do not share quality
time
together. Certainly, even though
work
is worship, individuals must spend
time
maintaining good relations. Another key reason for
this
balance is to maintain good health.
In other words
, human beings are designed to take appropriate rest to overcome the stress caused while they put in efforts. In the past,
for instance
, there were a lot of great personalities like Albert Einstein and Aryabhatta, who submerged into the research and sacrificed sleep and food. They were undoubtedly legends who contributed to the well being of the human race, but unfortunately they lost their lives at an early age as they developed adverse health conditions.
Thus
, excess
work
and negligence of these primary factors may be hazardous. In conclusion, maintaining a good ratio between
work
and life is vital.
Otherwise
,
this
may lead to negative consequences
such
as ruining the family bonds and the health. It is my hope that in
this
competitive world, people may attain
this
balance and seek harmony.
Submitted by Kavitha on

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