Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion .

Some topics never gain unanimous opinion from people, one
such
is
data discloser
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data, disclosure
data disclosure
data disclosures
data disclose
of any
research
by different institutions. Many people argue that,
research
will be done to serve mankind through their findings,
then
why cannot be they disclosed results as
such
whereas researchers say it is their intellectual property. There is so much
research
will be going on throughout the world in multiple areas like science, arts, businesses and other areas of interest. But one should know that all
such
research
output is the fruit of so much struggle, efforts, time and money spent on it. Most of the time the results of
such
research
may be either knowledge or product, obviously
that is
meant to overcome the drawbacks with existing methodologies or hurdles in doing something
perfect
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perfectly
. So they can be disclosed completely if paid well for the researchers and funded
to
Suggestion
with
it, which most of the governments doing by funding universities. So that sharing of findings can give
boost
Suggestion
a boost
to some other
research
group to work on it for elevate its efficiency to get better yields,
cumulatively final outcome
Suggestion
the cumulative final outcome
cumulative final outcome
will be the gigantic.
On the other hand
,
problem
Suggestion
the problem
is with private organizations, who will make use of
such
findings of public
research
and
further
develop advancements but make
such
findings personalize for self-benefit. Piracy of
research
findings
always discourage
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always discourages
the hardworking
research
folks. One can find notable drawbacks of disclosing complete findings of crucial
research
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research, for
for
example if
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example, if
it belongs to
mutagenesis
or cloning, there is a chance of exploiting technology with half knowledge and the results would be
adverse effect
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an adverse effect
the adverse effect
by
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of
unknown diseases or hazardous to
ecosystem
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ecosystems
the ecosystem
.
Finally I
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Finally, I
believe that all the
research
findings should be used for
wellbeing
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the wellbeing
of mankind and mother earth. The researchers should
respected
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respect
for their work with his intellectual property rights so that he can have
hold
Suggestion
a hold
on findings.

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