Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that it is the best option to accept bad situations,
such
as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others say that improve those situations will be a better option. I believe that it could happen, which some situations we cannot deal with. It might happen in family issues or a health problem. Some people choose to accept an unsatisfactory job or salary
that is
because of uncontrollable situations.  But the opponent would say that there are no circumstances we cannot deal with. They might say that we especially need to take action in those situations. If we do not move, it will never go to change.  I personally believe that there is always a choice we can take. It might not easy to solve it, but
that is
why we need to step up. I want to bring my personal experience.  I wanted to go to Canada, but I was not able to save any money because of family issues. I almost accepted my situation and gave up. One day, I talked to my friend about my situation and she delivered it to her parents. Ended up getting help from them in a financial way.  Sometimes, We are frustrated by the bad situation, but if we don't believe that we can not through that, we are never going to make it better. We might need to ask others for help or could feel more frustrated, but It is the right way to step out of the comfort zone.

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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