In order to improve a contry's education system youg students should be allowed to openly criticize their teachers during class time. What is your opinion? What are some other ways education system could be improved?
Education
is backbone for particular country
. Many people Suggestion
particular countries
a particular country
the particular country
says
that to improve quality of Suggestion
say
have said
education
and student
should be give
rights to point out their Suggestion
given
faculty
during lecturers
. I will give my personal opinion on that idea and as well as will try to give some technique to a speech that is open to the public
lectures
imrove
.
It is wrong, The to make better
improve
student
are torching their teachers while running lectures because of the faculty
feel that they going improper way and their idea is irrelevant. So that they feel why I give right thought to those students. Firstly
, teachers are
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is
most improtant
for Suggestion
more important
most important
next generation
and those are one the vital man in societySuggestion
the next generation
,
they make Accept space
,
society even
if they want Accept comma addition
society, even
destroy
the nation as well. Suggestion
to destroy
Secondly
, student
should follow instruction properly and establish peace during Suggestion
students
the student
lactures
and give more respect. So that, a speech that is open to the public
lectures
lecturers
faculty
can full of concentration on particular topic
and give Suggestion
a particular topic
relevant idea
of those Suggestion
a relevant idea
relevant ideas
the relevant idea
content
. Suggestion
contents
Moreover
, india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
indeed
believe
that teachers are as Jupiter of students so we give respect and obey their instructions.
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believes
On the other hand
, some people say that education system
is not proper. The Government should improve quality of Suggestion
the education system
education
. Firstly
, education system
should be uniform Suggestion
the education system
education
in all over the nation. So that all the student
can get proper knowledge. Suggestion
students
Secondly
, they should strict eye on education
model and hire telented
teachers and well qualified staff and increase the salary of faculties. endowed with talent or talents
talented
Also they
provide free Accept comma addition
Also, they
education
till graduate so that all the students can get chance
to study.
I opine that, Suggestion
a chance
the chance
student
should not torturing of their Suggestion
students
a student
the student
faculty
during class time and government should improve education system
and provide relevant facility to students and even faculties.Suggestion
the education system
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