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In order to improve a contry's education system youg students should be allowed to openly criticize their teachers during class time. What is your opinion? What are some other ways education system could be improved?

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Education
 is backbone for
particular country
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particular countries
a particular country
the particular country
. Many people
says
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say
have said
 that to improve quality of
education
 and
student
 should be
give
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given
 rights to point out their
faculty
 during
lecturers
a speech that is open to the public
lectures
. I will give my personal opinion on that idea and as well as will try to give some technique to
imrove
to make better
improve
. It is wrong, The
student
 are torching their teachers while running lectures because of the
faculty
 feel that they going improper way and their idea is irrelevant. So that they feel why I give right thought to those students.
Firstly
, teachers
are
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is
most improtant
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more important
most important
 for
next generation
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the next generation
 and those are one the vital man in society
,
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,
they make
society even
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society, even
 if they want
destroy
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to destroy
 the nation as well.
Secondly
,
student
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students
the student
 should follow instruction properly and establish peace during
lactures
a speech that is open to the public
lectures
lecturers
 and give more respect. So that,
faculty
 can full of concentration on
particular topic
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a particular topic
 and give
relevant idea
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a relevant idea
relevant ideas
the relevant idea
 of those
content
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contents
.
Moreover
,
india
a republic in the Asian subcontinent in southern Asia; second most populous country in the world; achieved independence from the United Kingdom in 1947
India
indeed
believe
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believes
 that teachers are as Jupiter of students so we give respect and obey their instructions.
On the other hand
, some people say that
education system
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the education system
 is not proper. The Government should improve quality of
education
.
Firstly
,
education system
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the education system
 should be uniform
education
 in all over the nation. So that all the
student
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students
 can get proper knowledge.
Secondly
, they should strict eye on
education
 model and hire
telented
endowed with talent or talents
talented
 teachers and well qualified staff and increase the salary of faculties.
Also they
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Also, they
 provide free
education
 till graduate so that all the students can get
chance
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a chance
the chance
 to study. I opine that,
student
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students
a student
the student
 should not torturing of their
faculty
 during class time and government should improve
education system
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the education system
 and provide relevant facility to students and even faculties.
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