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Some people think that genetically modified (GM) crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Opinions Diverge greatly about genetically modified crops.
Although
 there are some advantages, I would argue that drawbacks overshadow the positive aspects. On one hand, I understand why some people believe that transgenic fare brings benefits.
First
, it represents a low cost of production. A crop could be genetically modified having special properties against mosquitos and other plagues.
Subsequently
, less insecticide has to be used to produce more.
Also
, biological properties could be improved.
Therefore
, garlic would be able to grow faster, cutting down the time of harvest.
Second
, there are multiple possibilities: new flavours, colours, size, and many other factors to be added to our current food selection, letting us live the whole experience.
However
, these advantages cannot overshadow the disadvantages. According to recent researches, current data is insufficient to prove that transgenic engineering has not any secondary consequence. It is known by a great part of the Scientific’s community the involved risk that it will cause to DNA. Because of that, throughout the
next
 years, new diseases will be found in society as a consequence of modified genes. It is our responsibility to make enough experimentation to guarantee its harmless.
Furthermore
 and even more important, transgenic food opens the door to a vast pool of possibilities, the
next
 step will be modifications in human genetics. It is necessary to take consciousness of responsibility in nature and life. By way of conclusion, I personally believe that through all the benefits that genetically modified food represents a huge risk
that is
 latent and essential to have more data in order to dissipate all possible problems that it represents.

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