Some people think that cars are the best way to travel in a city, while others think that bicycle is better. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Nowadays, with a high standard of living, almost everyone posses
atleast
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at least
one means of transport for mobility. Many people argue
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the fact that cars are the best means for travel, while some still believe that moving through the city by bicycle is way better.
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essay will discuss both sides of argument in details and provide evidence as to why the use of
bicycle
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a bicycle
the bicycle
is better. It is an undeniable fact that
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
by car is tremendously comfortable because the passengers are well shielded from the scorching sun and soaring temperatures prevailing in urban areas. Whenever they are stuck in a traffic jam, car travellers can cosily wait patiently with the AC
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their car turned on. A recent survey conducted by the traffic management unit with the inhabitants of the outskirt of Melbourne revealed that most people use their cars to travel to Melbourne because it is more comfortable despite having a bicycle in their possession. In short, since journey in cars provide sufficient comforts, it remains the most preferred one over any other possibilities.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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