Many people believe that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on society and individual to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In Morden era, the
use
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of social media
is quite increase
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has quite increased
. Many
person
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people
persons
think that that
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of sites
have
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has
a plenty of negative effect on society and
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the individual
individuals
. There have many advantages and disadvantages which are discussed as below.
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of all, people do not
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of
internet
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the internet
for their professional
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use but
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use, but
they west ample amount of time on social media like Facebook
,
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,
Instagram
,
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,
Whatsapp and Twitter.
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, that
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of media is totally
west
any materials unused and rejected as worthless or unwanted
waste
of time and energy and
that is
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also
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diversify
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diversifying
the human mind
,
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,
so that social media users forget about their set goal which is important
for
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in
to
their life. Nowadays, most of students
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are using
are used
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mobile phone
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a mobile phone
and they
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social sites which
are ruined
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are ruining
ruin
their future career.
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, Using that
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of sites and applications through the mobile and wireless medium which are release ultraviolet rays
that is
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affected human brain cell event body. In revolutionary era, that
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of social media spread rumours like some persons post
surat
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Surat
found 20 corona virus patient and after that read the users feel panic.
Moreover
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, that sites through
increase misuse
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the increase misuse
of personal information and photographs, so that people get
black mailed
extortion of money by threats to divulge discrediting information
blackmailed
and many panicked person commit suicide. Many social sites users having
phobia
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a phobia
for social media and in
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frankly social media scattered human life and even their nature. In conclusion, people should less
use
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of social media and stay far from that
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of sites. Government should some restricted
on
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to
the
use
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of that
sites
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site
.

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