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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer.

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Life
 is the greatest teacher of all, it teaches us things that no one else could.
Life
 is full of surprises, but it is always full of lessons if
your
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you're
 willing to learn from it. The magical thing about
experience
 in
life
 is you learn something new
everyday
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every day
. With every
failures
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failure
 and heartbreak you
experience
, there is a lesson to be learnt from it. I agree that most experiences in our lives that seems difficult at that
time
 becomes valuable lessons for the
future
.
First
 of all, experiences teach us to not to
do
engage in
make
 the same mistakes that we had done in the past. Once a mistake is done, it is impossible to make it right, but the only one way is not to repeat it in
future
. We all agree that the path of achieving personal mystery is to transform mistakes, failures and setbacks into learning opportunities that will make us strong for the
future
. Mistakes are great, because we always can'
t
 learn from our success. Most of them don'
t
 realize is that they learn from their negative
experience
, if the identify it at the right
time
 or-else mistake will be again repeated.
In addition
, even with experiences some people become overconfident and that they
experience
 it when they overcome the hardship. By knowing the mistake done in the past some people don'
t
 care and become more confident and repeat the same thing over and over.
For instance
, when
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 went
third
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a third time
the third time
time
 to give my driving test, I made the same mistakes in the past because
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 was overconfident that
i'l
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I'l
I
 sure get the licence today. Even-though,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 had learnt will practicing, but failed to apply in actual tests. So always there will be small things and
also
 big things to learn in
life
, we should not forget to learn from small or silly mistakes.
Furthermore
, difficult experiences in
life
 will make us strong in the
future
. Because we have already experienced it before and we will have some idea to handle the toughest difficulties in
future
. Most of the people refuse to correct their mistakes and develop
a
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an
 egoist nature, where there is 95% of repeating same mistakes. But the person correcting of mistakes is the hero, failure doesn'
t
 make us weak, in-fact, it helps to understand the reason behind the failure better. In conclusion,
life
 is short but at the same
time
 it's one of the longest events you will ever have to endure.
Experience
 is always be our teacher, which makes us strong, focused to not to repeat the same mistakes, self-confidence and many things. If you think deeper every moment of pain, suffering or happiness will always leave you something to learn.
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