Today, TV channels provide men’s sport shows more than women’s sports shows. Why? Should TV channels give equal time for women’s sport and men’s sport?

In recent years, men’s
sport
shows considerably outnumber those of women. There has been an opinion that men and women
sport
program should be given equivalent TV coverage. In
this
essay, I would argue why
this
is not a smart idea. There is an array of reasons why TV producers are in favour of men’s
sport
competition rather than women’s. The most fundamental one is due to the prejudice of
gender
. A great number of people find women games are boring and not
worthwhile whereas
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worthwhile, whereas
men’s are regarded as fully conveying the spirit of sports.
This
is because the public
attach
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attaches
women with household responsibility which means women’s physical capacity is pitifully devalued. Meanwhile, men are considered the symbol of strength and
therefore
, men arouse higher public’s attention in terms of physical strength than women do. The
second
reason is the profit of the television station. It is evident that the majority of
public
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the public
are willing to allocate their money and time for their
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
men
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men's
sport
teams. Thanks to that deep-ingrained bias of the audience, people working in broadcasting sector would gain enormous profit from advertising contracts only by dedicating its prime time to the most sensational
men
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men's
sport
program.
However
, the concept of giving equal airtime for both
gender
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gender, sport
sport
games is unrealistic. It is probable that people who are of that opinion find that imbalance extremely unfair and they think equal coverage is a way to discourage
gender
discrimination. But I think they are ridiculously optimistic.
Firstly
, the main audience of
sport
shows is male, and giving women shows more airtime cannot change
this
group preference.
Therefore
, it could not make any big stride in confronting
gender
inequality. I believe that
the more practical
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the most practical
way is to educate. Women should be taught and learn about
different
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different sports
a different sport
sport
since secondary schools, and have the chance to represent their schools to compete with others in the city. As women have learned and experienced how intriguing a
sport
can be, they will naturally
developed
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develop
a curiosity for national and international
women
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women's
sport
programs. To conclude, we should expect a more practical approach because the outnumber of
men
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men's
sport
shows over women’s is the tip of the iceberg and a quantitative change in TV coverage could not solve the roots of the problem.

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