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University students are increasingly studying abroad as a part of their studies. Do the Advantages of studying abroad outweigh the disadvantages?

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To embark on, there are multiple reasons why the traditional ways of getting news are still popular.
First
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 of all, reading
newspaper
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the newspaper
a newspaper
 has become ardent habit of many people.
Everyone whether
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Everyone, whether
 from affluent or middle class are seen desperately waiting for paper in
morning
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the morning
 and enjoy it reading with
cup
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a cup
 of tea.
Moreover
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, these are the
portable
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most portable
, cheapest an easiest way of knowing about the global activities. It can be carried from one place to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 in bag and available at
economical price
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economical prices
an economical price
. It is so handy and merely by continuing flip of pages can make you omniscient.
Secondly
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,
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,
electricity and other appliances are not required.
Moreover
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,
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,
the other attachments are like icing on the cake.
For instance
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, the Hindustan times
has
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have
 multiple attachments like women’s fashion, career guide, culinary art and so on.
However
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, undoubtedly, technology has given the radical approach to reading news,
for example
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,
videos
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the videos
 provide
full and clear view
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a full and clear view
 to reading
besides
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 that we can download, share and forward it to our relatives and friends. Needless to say that
technophobic
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 will be having no place in
this
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 ever-advanced modern world. To conclude, the lives of people are drastically affected by advanced versions of technology yet, in my opinion, it will not be able to pose threat to the
existence
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existing
 traditional newspaper and magazines.
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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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