Government around the world are spending billions in support of space programs. This money would be better spent on research into improvements in human health. Do you agree or disagree?

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know from where I should start..I don'

have any words

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engage in

day

so sorry for not being deserving brother.I know your pain, your moment, even I've gone through d same situation and know how it feels. My words aren'

enough for you but d only one thing what I can say is sorry from her side.Yeah, I know everything about d relationship between you, but I never tried to disclose or talk about even when we were there in d same house talking about relationships and on...It's very hard to say that her love and feelings for you changed suddenly even I wasn'

expecting you she's my sister d loved one my part, but I must say she did wrong with your ford happiness of others..I'

literally blanked out

dai

time for Earth to make a complete rotation on its axis

day

I can listen your unheard voice

introduces an alternative

your

our

pain

introduces an alternative

are

moments you're pretending that everything is okay through hiding

of you or yourself

your

our

pain within you inside your heart for your family I can feel you, but now it has gone far I feel so bad, unlucky enough for being myself that I couldn'

able to keep you together forever because of our family, they're not satisfied with it even

introduces an alternative

so she sacrificed for happiness of others and at d moment I can'

even denied her decision

dai

time for Earth to make a complete rotation on its axis

day

did

seeing you own sister crying and depressed isn'

easy for me

dai

engage in

day

due

so we've to accept that fact she decided. We talk about you both

dai

engage in

did

die

we support courage, her for choosing d right path by taking everything into d consideration d fact, she decided to embrace her life we can'

go against her.I'

so sorry brother, I'

speechless yr

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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0Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
4Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Include an introduction and conclusion

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

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