Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people consider that youth is the best
time
in
life
for every person.
Nevertheless
, there are people with
opposite point
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the opposite point
an opposite point
of view. They are sure that old generation
have
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has
rich experience which helps them to live better. On the one hand, young people have few problems and feel
youself
reflexive form of "you"
yourself
free. They
needn't earning
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are not earning
aren't earning
were not earning
weren't earning
don't earn
do not earn
didn't earn
money and searching
place
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a place
for living.
Moreover
, they don't think about
creation
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creating
family and improve career growth.
On the other hand
, some of them start to think about
future
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the future
very early and try to learn intensively for entering the best university. It requires much
time
and patient what sometimes leads to stress and depression. Teenage's freedom depends
of
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on
conditions in family or
cuntry
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
. If they
born
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bore
in poor family with one family member, young people have to work as soon as possible
for
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in
helping family. Rich children don't need to worry about future and usually they have a lot of free
time
. Than
elrder
we become than more responsibilities we receive. Family, children, work
require
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requires
our
time
and plans. Family's
life
brings people happy, emotions and contain days with good and
wories
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bad
worse
events. When
family
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the family
is healthy and happy people's
life
is good and confident anyway. But, some people
deside
reach, make, or come to a decision about something
decide
decided
desire
live
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to live
without family. Some of them afraid of lost freedom, others prefer developing work skills. In my opinion the most important aspect in
life
is confident in today. It is no
metter
a vaguely specified concern
matter
how old are you, if your family is
allright
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all right
and you know what you want from
life
, you are happy anyway.

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