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There should be laws to control the amount and type of violence shown on television programs. To what extent do u agree/ disgree with this statement.

#laws #control #amount #type #violence #television #programs #disgree
It is true that there is
violence
 on television. But it is
upto
Suggestion
up to
 an individual choice to decide what is too much, what
is'nt
is not
isn't
 and I disagree
this
 point of view. Fortunately, we all are free to decide which
TV
 programs we want to watch. Laws are not necessary to help us decide. It
is'nt
is not
isn't
disfficult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
 to find what kind of
TV
 programs are on
TV
, at any point of time.
most
Suggestion
Most
 of the
news papers
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspapers
 give information on
TV
 programs along with the schedule.
Also anyone
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Also, anyone
 who watches
TV
 programs regularly, he or she knows what kind of programs are aired on. Because of
this
 it is easy to avoid
violence
 programs on
TV
. Modern technology has given us a tool to control and monitor the
TV
 shows we see. It is
also
 possible to block a channel.
Thus parents
Accept comma addition
Thus, parents
 can protect their children from seeing the shows that are violent for them. Adults can
also
 use
this
 technology to avoid seeing programs that they
dont
do not
don't
 want to see. The best thing about
TV
 is it has
variety
Suggestion
a variety
 of programs.
For instance
 news programs for serious people, cartoon and movies for those who want to be entertained, sports for game lovers. The variety of programs need to be monitored if they show some
violence
. We each have own ideas about what is
voilent
acting with or marked by or resulting from great force or energy or emotional intensity
violent
 and what is
,
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,
nt
negation of a word or group of words
not
. It would be
difficicult
not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
difficult
 to make laws about
violence
 on
TV
 that would satisfy everybody.
Hence
, It is better to let each individual make their decision.

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