You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, give details of your study plans explain why you want to get a part-time job suggest how your friend could help you find a job

Dear Sara, I hope
this
letter finds you well.I will be coming to London
next
month to do my Masters degree in economics and I need your support in finding me a part-time job.
First
, I got a partial scholarship from my university here in Kuwait to study in London.I will be living in London for 2 years because I have to finish 45 credit hours to receive my degree.
Furthermore
, I will not be able to visit Kuwait during the holidays unless I got a well paid work.
Second
, I have to get a work immediately in order to cover all my expenses and
also
to improve my practical skills.
Moreover
, I am planning to do internal tourism in the United Kingdoms during my vacations.
Third
, my plan is to get a part-time work in a bank, so I can have the best experience along my college.
In addition
, I can do any other related
job
Accept comma addition
job, for
for instance
, in an accountant company, in a school or in a restaurant.I will appreciate it if you can help me in finding a job before I arrive
next
month.If you can collect me all related advertisements from the local newspaper, it would be great.
Finally
, I will be waiting for your response and I am looking forward to see you soon. Yours sincerely, Lama Jaljouli

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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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