Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Many languages are

extincted

no longer in existence; lost or especially having died out leaving no living representatives

extinct

annually due to globalization. Some humans believe that to have specific numbers of dialects provide more easiness in communicating to the world. I strongly agree with the statement, because it creates harmony in the society as well as stronger the bonding among nations. Undoubtedly, to learn several languages explore one's mind and thoughts. It can be improved cognitive skills, which is an essential element, for logical thinking and deep learning.

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, according to a recent study, bilingual children achieved better scores than monolingual one's in many

standardizd

brought into conformity with a standard

standardized

tests.

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, jargon is a crucial tool in order to alive any culture.

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, the limited number of tongues provide a great extent of comfortability in the conversation. It allows more tourists to visit different countries for recreational purposes without any communication barrier.

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, an English language has flourished throughout the world.

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allows people to travel at any place because at present most of the humans are quite well in it and they easily grasp other norms.

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, it has brought a great revolution in the student life. Now a

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, pupils do not worry about to understand different accents, they keenly focus just on their important subjects,

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as Physics, Chemistry, and Mathematics. To conclude, people can communicate in a better way with fewer dialects, but some others think that

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the extinction

of a

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a characteristic language of a particular group (as among thieves)

jargon

has affected a culture, which is a myth, because not many persons speak it. The limited multitude of tongues, have brought several positive aspects in our social life.

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Lexical resource: 5.0

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Grammatical Range: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Linguistic diversity
Cultural heritage
Language extinction
Communication barrier
Linguistic imperialism
Endangered languages
Language revitalization
Monolingual
Multilingual
Language preservation
Homogenization
Language policy
Cultural assimilation
Intangible heritage
Indigenous languages
Globalization
Dialects
Localization
Language documentation
Digital archiving

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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