Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspaper will remain then most important source of news.

Internet
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The internet
is undertaking the world by storm, you get every single information at your finger tip
on
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for
with
you
mobile
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Mobile
phones and computers. With growing applications in digital world and progressive lifestyle,
people
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People
have
access
to news using
internet
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the internet
. It’s a convenient way to peek
in
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into
the world, yet conventional
newspaper
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Newspaper
are still on the run serving to almost every single person who doesn’t have
access
to
internet
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Internet
. So I firmly agree that
newspaper
is the most important source of news.
To begin
with
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with, internet
internet
has
plethora
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a plethora
of information on every subject human deals in his daily life ranging
from
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From
entertainment, education, news,
work etc
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work, etc.
work etc.
all you need is a computer or smart phone. With
advancement
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Advancement
in lifestyle and time limitation people often read news on the
internet
thereby saving time
and
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And
paper, thanks to the technology.
Although
internet
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the internet
is more prevalent it is unable to serve the
fundamental concept
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The fundamental concept
Fundamental concept
of news
that is
to communicate information to the entire citizen of the country.
For instance
developing nations fall short when it comes to use of
internet
, older generation, villagers
and
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And
other unfortunates
doesn’t have
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don’t have
access
to
internet
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the internet
, and
that is
where
news paper
a daily or weekly publication on folded sheets; contains news and articles and advertisements
newspaper
serves them best. Conventional
newspaper
is the most easy and affordable means of fetching news. It’s a
simple form of
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simple form
communication
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Communication
means and
entire nation
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entire nations
the entire nation
has
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have
access
to
newspaper
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a newspaper
newspapers
the newspaper
. Many Indian towns and villages has
local
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Local
library which serves them for free.
Moreover it
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Moreover, it
comes with a negligible price, no smart phones and
internet
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Internet
data required. So to summon my decision with the fact that
although
many people strive to read news on the
internet
,
newspaper
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The newspaper
Newspaper
still remains to
most vital source
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the most vital source
of news as it
fulfills
put in effect
fulfils
the purpose with no expensive gadgets
and
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And
internet
service. That makes the
newspaper
most important source till date.

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