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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspaper will remain then most important source of news.

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Internet
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 is undertaking the world by storm, you get every single
information
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piece of information
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 at your
finger tip
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fingertip
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 on
you
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mobile phones and computers. With growing applications in
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the digital
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 world and
progressive
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 lifestyle, people have
access
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 to
news
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 using
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internet
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the internet
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. It’s a convenient way to peek
in
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 the world, yet conventional
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newspapers
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newspaper
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 are still on the run serving
to
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almost every single person who doesn’t have
access
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 to
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the
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internet
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. So I firmly agree that
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newspaper
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the newspaper
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 is the most important source of
news
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.
To begin
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 has
plethora
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a plethora
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 of information on every subject human deals
in
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his
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their
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 daily life ranging from entertainment, education,
news
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, work etc all you need is a computer or
smart phone
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smartphone
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. With
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advancement
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advancements
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 in lifestyle and time
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limitations
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limitation
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limitation,
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 people often read
news
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 on the
internet
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 thereby saving time and paper, thanks to
the
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technology.
Although
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internet
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the internet
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 is more prevalent it is unable to serve the fundamental concept of
news
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that
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 is to communicate information to the entire
citizen
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citizens
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 of the country.
For
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instance
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instance,
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 developing nations fall short when it comes to
use
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 of
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internet
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the internet
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,
older
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the older
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 generation, villagers and other
unfortunates
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doesn’t
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people don’t
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 have
access
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 to
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internet
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, and
that is
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 where
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news paper
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newspapers
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serves
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serve
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 them best. Conventional
newspaper
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 is the most easy and affordable means of fetching
news
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. It’s a simple form of communication means and
entire
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the entire
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 nation has
access
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newspaper
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newspapers
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. Many Indian towns and villages
has
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local library which serves them for free.
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Moreover
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 it comes with a negligible price, no
smart phones
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smartphones
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 and
internet
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 data required. So to summon my decision with the fact that
although
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 many people strive to read
news
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 on the
internet
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,
newspaper
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 still remains to most vital source of
news
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 as it fulfills the purpose with no expensive gadgets and
internet
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 service. That makes the
newspaper
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most
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the most
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 important source
till
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 date.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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