Inventors are not as important to society as doctors.To what extent do you agree with this statement? Provide reasons for your answer. Include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Today's
society
is flourishing day by day in different fields. But the doctors give more importance than the inventors who have dedicated their lives to research.
This
essay does not agree much with
this
statement because inventors play equal role as doctors in the development of the community. In
further paragraph
Suggestion
a further paragraph
in intent to put forth my view points. Doctors plays
vital character
Suggestion
a vital character
in the community. They help people to cure their diseases.
Hence
, they are considered ideal in
society
and stands an important portrayal in the nation's eye.
However
, scientist too plays a major role in the development of the medical field. It helps doctors to use new drugs and to cure communicable and noncommunicable disease.
For instance
, research like genomics helps to treat many deadly diseases.
Thus
, advancement in the field of medical, helps doctors to serve better to the people of the
society
. In
this
modernization, new technology, researchers are taking place. Scientist spends hundreds of hours doing research in medical science, space, machines, finding remedies for deadly diseases and much more. They dedicate their entire life for the growth and development of the country.
For instance
, there were many new machines invented which are used to diagnose different diseases like ECG, MRI, X-RAYS and many more. Due to which medical science has touched new heights due to the hard work of the inventors.
Therefore
, inventors are the founders of
this
world. In conclusion, I would pen down, saying that, both inventors and doctors are equally important in the
society
.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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