Many people find it difficult to speak in front of and to present to anaudience. It is believed that this skill should be taught in school. Why is this important? To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

In
this
modern age of global communication,
major portion
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a major portion
the major portion
major portions
of the population
lack
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lacks
the ever vital
skill
of great oration.
Thus
, it has been proposed that children should be groomed to be great orators starting from their school lives. I somewhat agree with
this
position. Below I will be discussing on the great advantages of having a well developed public speaking training from school life itself as well as some potential collateral damage that it may inflict upon our society. Many great personalities like Lord Krishna, former president of the united states Barack Obama, former
first
lady Michelle Obama, tech mogul Bill Gates & the list goes on are well known to the whole
world
of
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by
possessing great oratory skills. They have that
immersive
making a strong or vivid impression
impressive
dialogue delivery which captivates their audience make make them experience their vision & goals in real time.
Thus
, from
this
, we can logically come into the conclusion that having a proper public speaking
skill
is an asset & is directly linked to success. A recent research conducted in Nepal
also
concludes that great speaking individuals have a 80% chance in achieving their ultimate goals & getting things done compared to people who were ill equipped in public speaking & had a mere 30% chance of getting to the creamy top of success. Being able to sway people with one's words are of great importance & can bring about great change & revolution in the
world
. But not all these have been of positive significance. Great orators like Adolf Hitler, Vladimir Lenin, Joseph Stalin, Mussolini have brought about devastation to the
world
in the form of
World
Wars. They had the ability to manipulate the general public & made them believe that their vision was for the peace & good for the general population. In reality, it
was
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has been
just mind management
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a just mind management
that only brought destruction to
this
world
& we are still reeling with the effects of it. A unique research was done at Oxford University on the public speaking abilities of the personalities during the
world
war & it has been found out that more than 73% of the
world
war leaders had immense power to
mezmerize
attract strongly, as if with a magnet
mesmerize
mesmerise
the general public with their speeches.
Thus
, a little caution has to be warranted & a proper protocol should be established before making use of public speaking training widespread in schools. In conclusion, great personalities have been born out
this
vital
personality
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personality, skill
skill
of public speaking, but like they say, tongue can either be your friend or your enemy. It all depends on how you use it.
Thus
, oratory
skill
development should be implemented in schools for future grooming of the future leaders, but a proper amount of research & protocol should be established so as to not give rise to the dark leaders of the
World
War era.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
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  • moreover
  • also
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  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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