In many schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (eg. languages) and boys choose science subjects (eg. Physics). What do you think are the reasons? Do you think that this tendency should be changed?

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In many schools and universities, females choose arts subjects as languages.

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, males choose science subjects

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as physics. The reason behind

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is that boys focus on mental materials, and girls focus on something that brings them closer to society. It is about the nature of both. In more detail, the influence of the mind has more effects on men than women. So it is really normal that men prefer to solve mental issues over emotional problems; unlike women, it is easier for them to deal with the emotional stuff.

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, when a woman talks to her man about a problem that she has, the man starts to give logical solutions;

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does not please her, and it is more helpful to give her emotional talk because that's what she responds to. They prefer art because it's in contact with their feelings. It is not reasonable to change

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direction.

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means changing the nature of both, and, after all, it’s about what makes us comfortable and happy. Whether we choose is something to do with the mind or emotions. Choosing something comfortable for us means that we will be good at it.

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, the University of Harvard has shown that 80

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of successful people are people who love their work and feel connected with it. In conclusion, my opinion may not be correct, and there may be different reasons

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of the ones I mentioned, which are the nature of us.

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coherence cohesion

The essay would benefit from a clearer structure in the introduction and conclusion. Clearly state the main points that will be discussed in the introduction and summarize them effectively in the conclusion.

task achievement

Although the main points are presented, they could be further developed with more detailed explanations and additional specific examples to reinforce the argument.

task achievement

The essay shows a clear understanding of the task, addressing both the reasons behind the tendency and expressing an opinion on whether it should be changed.

clear comprehensive ideas

The ideas presented are relevant and demonstrate a good understanding of the topic, showing insight into the differences in interests between genders.

Your opinion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

250 words

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In many schools and universities, girls tend to choose arts subjects (eg. languages) and boys choose science subjects (eg. Physics). What do you think are the reasons? Do you think that this tendency should be changed?

Your opinion

differences between countries are becoming less evident. Nowadays, people are watching the same film, fashion and tv channels. To what extend do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

In some places old age is valued, while in other cultures youth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinions.

In the future, more people will choose to go on holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

*Tourism is always a force for good which enables people of different countries to understand each other. To what extent do you agree with this idea? You should give reasons for your answer, and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.