Some people say that industrial growth is necessary to solve poverty , but some other people argue that industrial growth is creating environmental problems and it should be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is debatable idea that,
for
Suggestion
to
solve the issue of poverty is the
more
being nothing more than specified
mere
improvement of
company
Suggestion
the company
a company
, while
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
thought that
,
Accept space
,
it
create
Suggestion
creates
negative effect
Suggestion
a negative effect
on the nature. According to my opinion, it is necessary to
develope
make something new, such as a product or a mental or artistic creation
develop
more company for the better employment, both views will
disscuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
in the upcoming paragraphs. To embark with
,
Accept space
,
the poverty rate is very high around the world
becasue
for the reason that; on account of
because
of the unemployment, the companies not willing to
inprove
to make better
improve
thier
of them or themselves
their
system and give
best
Suggestion
the best
opportunity
to
Suggestion
of
human being.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+

I have a gift for you 🎁

Let me thank you for using this site and give you my ebook "The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+" for free. For your part, just promise that you will do your best to pass the exam successfully.

Try other services:

All the services are free for Premium users