The internet provide us with information about life and culture of different countries and some people say it is not necessary to visit these countries to learn about them. To what extend do you agree and disagree with the statement? Give your opinion and relevant example.

Internet
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The internet
offer
Suggestion
offers
us many
information
including different states' cul5ture. Some individuals think it is not necessary to go to a
country
to understand the local culture.
This
essay agrees with
this
point because many theoretical
information
and practical experience can be both obtained through
internet
or relevant devices. The theoretical
information
about a
country
is easier to be acquired by
internet
than by textbooks or go to a
country
. Compared with traditional ways of getting knowledge,
internet
has the advantages of efficient and economical. People just need to input a question about an area into the Google or Bing, the answer will come out in few seconds which includes articles, pictures and even videos.
These
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This
information
are
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is
more difficult to access in
traditional way
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the traditional way
a traditional way
.
For example
, if someone
want
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wants
to find the knowledge about the Great Wall, he or she
have
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has
to spend a lot of time and money to search the documents in libraries or apply the visa and reserve many tickets to China, while
Internet
could deal with
such
questions with an eyelash.
Furthermore
, the
internet
and its relevant devices derived are able to give learners more actual experiences. In the past, some researchers could argue that the real experiences of a place
is
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are
unreplaceable
impossible to replace
irreplaceable
, since touching a site or communicate with local people in necessary for a deep research.
However
, with developing technology, the combination of the relevant new devices and
internet
make
this
possible.
For instance
, anyone can use VR and
internet
map to walk and visit an area which seems as the real situation and chat with local residents face-to-face through
social network
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social networks
the social network
a social network
. In conclusion, I agree with the opinion that it is not necessary to go to a
country
to learn it due to
internet
, because
internet
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the internet
can make people's learning faster and more economical and it can give a person nearly the real experiences of visiting a
country
.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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