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Some people say modern innovations bring a lot of problems than benefits. Do you agree or disagree ?

#people #innovations
In my opinion modern innovations bring more benefits than problems so I disagree with the opposite idea. I can name an example
such
 as e-shopping which now day is very popular in our society. It allows to buy anything that you need in less than two minutes through internet and it is pretty simple.
Moreover you
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Moreover, you
 could get access to products that are not available
on
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in
you
of you or yourself
your
 city or
country
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country, for
for
instance I
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instance, I
am use
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am using
 to buy computer science books that are not available in Ireland or
some times
on certain occasions or in certain cases but not always
sometimes
 when my budget allow me I buy some electronic stuff related to IOT (Internet of Things). The negative side of e-shopping could be that people often feel more
confortable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
 when buying without human interaction, so it increases the level of isolation
on
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of
 a person. Another modern innovation is the smartphone, it is a tool that everybody need which makes our life
more simpler
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simpler
 and allow us to do almost everything from access to our emails, chat with anyone of your friend or
familiy
a social unit living together
family
 members wherever you are, book a taxi, buying flight tickets, GPS navigation, e-shopping and so on. But well it is so useful that it creates a feeling in us that we cannot live without it and despite of the fact that it connect us it
also
 makes people to live in a more isolated way. To conclude modern innovations bring us many benefits and it will bring more in the
future but
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future, but
 we have to be responsible about how to use those innovations.

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