Nowadays tourism generates a significant portion of national income for many countries, but it has certain drawbacks too. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of tourism and provide a logical conclusion

Tourism
is an important factor in the growth of
economy
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the economy
of any
country
. It can make or break a
countries
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country's
future. But depending solely on
tourism
can
also
be risky.
This
essay will
disscuss
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
discusses
the benefits as well as the drawbacks that can occur due to
tourism
. A
country
can
benefit
from
toursim
the business of providing services to tourists
tourism
in
serveral
(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many
several
ways. These benefits can include financial advantages and can
also
portray a positive picture of a
nation
.
Tourism
can
supplyment
add as a supplement to what seems insufficient
supplement
a
nation
's economy by generating revenue in multiple sectors, both government and non-government entities.
For example
, with increased
tourism
, a
countries
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country's
national airline can
benefit
by providing routes to
location
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locations
a location
with a potentially large number of visitors by providing income for the government sectors. Whereas, private entities, like hotels,
resturants
a building where people go to eat
restaurants
and tour operators can
also
benefit
with the increased influx of visitors. A
nation
can portray a positive aspect of their
country
by promoting
tourism
. The advantage of
such
a strategy is two folds, increased income is a more obvious
benefit but
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benefit, but
another
benefit
is the neighbouring and other countries can view the positive side of the
nation
. Where there are many benefits of
tourism
, there are
also
some disadvantages. Some of these
disadvatages
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
can be
minor but
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minor, but
some can have a long lasting effect on a
country
. Some of the smaller disadvantages can include littering, since the tourist visiting a
country
may not abide by a
nation
's policies and
hence
throw rubbish openly.
This
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
can incur and additional cost
by
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of
providing more
infrastucture including
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infrastructure, including
infrastructure including
more policing and administrative force and providing waste management
solutious
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solutions
solution
at tourist sites.
This
type of attitude can be of minor inconvenience for a
country but
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country, but
some
behaviors
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
can greatly
effect
have an effect upon
affect
a
nation
.
Such
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviours
include vandalizing and disturbing national heritage site.
This
can have
unreversable
incapable of being reversed
irreversible
consequences for a
nation
and the sites may not be able to return to its original state. In conclusion,
tourism
can bring many
benefit
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benefits
to a
nation
but it is not without its cons. A
nation
can duly
benefit
finacially
from a financial point of view
financially
from the added influx of people visiting the
country
and can portray the positive side of a
country
.
However
, the incoming people with require extra infrastructure which may cause an inconvenience for a
country
. All the people visiting a
country
may not have good
intensions
an anticipated outcome that is intended or that guides your planned actions
intentions
and can negatively effect sites that can have major consequences.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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