Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them.Others think that there are better ways to show that we care about them.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed in certain companies that employees should care more about how they dress to work, while other companies appreciate the
of work an employee has to offer. In my opinion, our appearances matter depending on the job acquired,
, is more important that a
focuses on delivering great services. Appearances are usually considered in jobs that require employees to interact constantly with clients,
for example
, marketing, human resources or trade. The reason
is important is because outfits work as an expression of personality, and allow employees to have a sense of empowerment. Some employees believe that wearing a suit is like an armoire that makes them invincible.
, looking presentable gives clients the illusion that an employee is organized and responsible.
By contrast
, a good
service helps a
grow. When appearances do not take into consideration, customers see an employee as a human being, not as a service.
creates a sense of comfort, which helps companies develop better and stronger relationships with its clients.
, customers are more willing to remain loyal to one
. From my experience, I believe both are important. When I am dressed appropriately for an occasion,
for example
a meeting, I have noticed that my colleagues tend to focus more on what I am trying to communicate.
means that people might be taken more seriously depending on what they are wearing.
should always be of significant importance, because at the end of the day a
is selling a product or service, not a style. In conclusion, companies should strive for a balance between appearances and
, but the latter should be emphasized more in the future development of a

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For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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