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The food travels thousands of miles from farm to consumer. Some people think it would be better to our environment and economy if people only ole only locally produced food. What extent do the advantages out weigh the disadvantages?

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Everyone would love to eat different types of foods in all season. Some people have the opinion that imported
food
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 has a detrimental effect on the local economy and culture and it would be better if people ate only locally produced
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.
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, I oppose
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 view. In my opinion, imported
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 brings many advantages and benefits which outweigh the disadvantages.
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 with, imported
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 has a negative effect on the local market.
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 can be seen in
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countries
a country
 like Japan, where imported
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 has become more popular compare to local traditional
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.
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, imported
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 is not as fresh as it travels thousand of miles in packed containers so eating
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 kind of
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 can make people sick as well. On the flip side, There are numerous advantages of imported
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.
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, imported
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food travel
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food, travel
 thousand of miles via air, sea or roads and countless people are associated with
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 as wholesalers, labour, transport companies and many more. It generates employment for all of them.
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, it helps trade between countries. We all know, any
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 would not able to produce all varieties of
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 due to the different climate. Any
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 can produce only some variety of
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 and rest of them, they have to import from other countries. To illustrate with an example, India produces a very little quantity of kiwis annually and it would not fulfil the
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 needs. So India import kiwis from different countries and export other
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 to those countries which helps in the economy. To conclude, undoubtedly there are few disadvantages of imported
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 like it is not fresh, but Imported
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 has plenty of advantages
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 as generate employment and allow
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the country
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 to export other items which helps in the economy. Looking into all these factors, I believe imported
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 advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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