‘Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity.’ How far do you share this viewpoint?

Due to
tough economic situation
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the tough economic situation
and high unemployment rate all over the world, numerous charity organizations have run to help people
in
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on
humanitarian grounds. It is said that every member of society should have a monetary contribution there. I disagree with
this
idea because of several reasons and in
this
essay I will explain why in
this
essay.
First
of all, even for worthy causes the donation should be
voluntarily
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voluntary
not by force or regulation. Everyone who owns the sum of
money
, does not
matter he
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matter, he
was born
in
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into
wealth or worked to earn it, has the absolute right to spend it
however
he likes. Inducing people to give their
money
, even to reasonable intentions, is comparable to what thieves are doing violently. A
second
negative factor is that not all society members can afford to pay an amount of
money
or charitable reasons in spite of the fact that they receive a considerable income. By
this
I mean that the majority of people contend with expenses, things like gas, school supplies, and
insurance which
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insurance, which
almost always swallow their salaries and nothing is left behind for benevolent work.
Furthermore
, if the heads of the households have to withdraw a certain amount of
money
from their bank account regularly, they feel that like paying bills; an obligation despite of being fair, is unpleasant. Whist it could be seen
for example
,
on
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in
the press reports or media those who willingly donate even
huge amount
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a huge amount
of
money
to the poor,
are contented
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is contented
sincerely. It is true that allocating a fixed sum of
money
by
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of
every individual's income could bring
charities foundations
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charities, foundations
charity foundations
charity charity foundations
to a huge investment and alleviate some social problems like poverty. Despite
this
, it seems that for many average people, considering others' needs is outweighed by their own requirements. To conclude, it appears to me that if the financial assistance were to be compulsory, the donors would be discontented and the nature of
donation
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the donation
as a
voluntarily
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voluntary
act would be under question.

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