With the increased global demand in oil and gas undiscovered areas of the world should be opened up to access more resources. To what extent do you agree?

The unexplored reserves of
fuel
of the world should be enclosed in order to access more resources for the fulfilment of global dramatic crave towards oil and gas. I,
however
, disagree with
this
view. I believe that
this
can harm the living planet and as well as the gas may get vanished due to over consumption. To inaugurate, I think that they primarily contribute to global warming. The burning of ammunition and gases releases different type of harmful smokes of carbon dioxide, carbon monoxide etc. Which depletes the ozone layer of our planet.
For instance
, nowadays with the increment in usage of fossil
fuel
in our daily life the release of harmful smokes is high. These are leading to the warming of the globe and
hence
results in the melting of polar ice which has increased the sea level.
In addition
to
this
, being non-renewable resources the over consumption of
fuel
may lead to its disappearance. The reserves of fossil
fuel
are limited in the globe. They cannot be reproduced after its devour. To illustrate, the USA alone uses around 22% of the world's
fuel
and it would be difficult to meet the rising demand with the limited resources. To conclude, the overuse of fuels and gas may deteriorate the environment and may extinct if the crave goes up following
this
trend.
Hence
, I firmly disagree with
this
view.

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