Happiness is considered very important in life . why is it difficult to define ? what factors are important in achieving happiness?

Happiness
is the most essential and most desirable aspects in every
one
personal
life
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The definition of
happiness
varies from
person
to
person
and there is no unique definition for it
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so
to a very great extent or degree
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in
this
essay
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we will talk about the reason behind the difficulty to explain it and
factors
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the factors
responsible for gaining pleasure in
life
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However
, it is not that easy to define
happiness
because it varies from
person
to
person
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Happiness
depends upon the perception of the
people which
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people, which
differ from
one
another
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Some
person
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people
search out pleasure in achieving a set of goal while others believe that
happiness
is to be healthy and wealthy
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For
example some
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example, some
student
believe
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believes
that the key element
for
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of
in
pleasurable
life
is to get a good marks in exam and another student feel
happiness
in achieving
top score
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top scores
the top score
a top score
in
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a football game
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With regard to the question of factors
for
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of
experiencing
happiness
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I think there are several points that plays
essential role
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an essential role
to grab a
happiness
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Firstly
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
assume that money could be the most essential factor that may bring
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smiles
or
happiness
to anyone's face
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If someone is financially strong
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they can
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
their all desire and needs in
life
which naturally bring
happiness
in them
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Secondly
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I believe that ' inner
satification
' is
one
of the important
factor
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factors
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If each
of
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one feels
of one feels
of one feels feels
one
fells grateful and satisfy what they have
then
noone
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no one
will be sad for any reason
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In conclusion
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due to the different perception of people it is difficult to describe
happiness
and money and being satisfied with what we have are the most important factors for
happiness
.
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