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Happiness is considered very important in life . why is it difficult to define ? what factors are important in achieving happiness?

#happiness #life #factors
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Happiness
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 is the most essential and most desirable aspects in every
one
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 personal
life
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 The definition of
happiness
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 varies from
person
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 to
person
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 and there is no unique definition for it
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so
to a very great extent or degree
So
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 in
this
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 we will talk about the reason behind the difficulty to explain it and
factors
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the factors
 responsible for gaining pleasure in
life
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However
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, it is not that easy to define
happiness
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 because it varies from
person
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 to
person
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Happiness
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 depends upon the perception of the
people which
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people, which
 differ from
one
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 another
.
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 Some
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person
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people
 search out pleasure in achieving a set of goal while others believe that
happiness
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 is to be healthy and wealthy
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For
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example some
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example, some
 student
believe
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believes
 that the key element
for
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of
in
 pleasurable
life
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 is to get a good marks in exam and another student feel
happiness
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 in achieving
top score
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top scores
the top score
a top score
 in
football game
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a football game
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 With regard to the question of factors
for
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of
 experiencing
happiness
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 I think there are several points that plays
essential role
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an essential role
 to grab a
happiness
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Firstly
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i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 assume that money could be the most essential factor that may bring
smile
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smiles
 or
happiness
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 to anyone's face
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 If someone is financially strong
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 they can
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
 their all desire and needs in
life
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 which naturally bring
happiness
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 in them
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Secondly
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 I believe that ' inner
satification
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 ' is
one
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 of the important
factor
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factors
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 If each
of
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one feels
of one feels
of one feels feels
one
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 fells grateful and satisfy what they have
then
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noone
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no one
 will be sad for any reason
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 In conclusion
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 due to the different perception of people it is difficult to describe
happiness
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 and money and being satisfied with what we have are the most important factors for
happiness
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